Once, and just once, we found a sentient race still alive. Thank you for posting more! He is posted on the flagship's bridge, along with. My species refer to ourselves as Human. Our homeworld is a category twelve temperate at co, I interrupted him. HOLY SHIT!!! I did not at first bother to look up from the desktop in front of me where the standard security systems were scanning the being in front of me for weapons, pathogens, parasites and other such contraband. Or we can just call it the Brrrt class vessel, Holy shit i only just found the original prey, and LOVE IT. Instead something black, blue and brown hurtled into the flank of one of the alien warriors with a crunch and a hiss of pain. Eagerly looking forward to more, no matter how long it takes, and will certainly check out Spellgun. Mods, if this script seems too spammy, I can up the checking interval, lower the time limit, or remove this altogether. They saw me coming but I put three rounds into one and its shield failed against the third. I enjoyed watching their movies, and Jenkins and I spent nearly a full diurnal watching first a series of enjoyable fantasies called Star Wars, then a trilogy called The Lord of the Rings which I then discovered had originally been a book and read. Complicated., Every species has fiction, I pointed out. The other, a male called Jung, pointed out a peninsula on the prograde end of the largest land mass when asked where his home was. Your visa will be denied if you continue to mock the immigration system., Its facial feature twisted up into an expression of amusement. Was 9 days late to the party. Tough bastards. he said, and spat bright red blood onto the Hunter corpse next to him. If you encounter any issues, please contact Lord Licorice on IRC/Discord or email 4chan [at] thisisnotatrueending.com. This will probably gonna get buried in the comments and I dont know how much you are using modern military stuff for inspiration for the combat scenes but there is one part I would recommend a change. I was genuinely thinking about this earlier today. Woke up, searched for this, and just finished it. The formatting was good too seeing as how you didn't have to continue the story in the comments like on reddit. Can we please start with the official stuff? It's back! The classic tale of first contact. The UTA Dreadnought "Supremacy" was in essence a city in space. I'm so glad I found this post before it was archived. The Wiki. It was, as far as I could track back, originally posted as two parts, the second of which I will post tomorrow. I nodded. Jenkins sprinted for cover, and I followed. Blazcowickz fighting against the magitech cult of Zarus. Thanks for sending me the message about it or I likely would have missed it as I was on vacation when you released it. I get the impression that station 442 is not the only place where you. Vedreg kept going, apparently oblivious to the exchange. You guys and your consistently excellent fiction are ruining my life in all right right ways. Long-term observation showed that after hatching the individual would slowly but surely go insane, to the point where none reached old age. NameKevin Jenkins. Jenkinssomehow, impossibly alive despite taking a kinetic pulse round to the chestwrestled very briefly with the Hunter, and then there was a horrible organic splitting noise, the hiss became a shriek, and the gun was in hands, blood and mangled meat dripping from the cybernetic interface. They are something far more than that. Civilian trade station 591 Outlook on Forever, Customs and Immigration Officer Krrkktnkk aktnnzziktk interviewing immigrant pre-Contact abductee. I will need to interview you in private. I told it. Time well spent. ago u/mishdaddy. "Never underestimate the power of making an Ensign cry." 1700 B.C.E.) David picks through the wreckage of his spectacular dogfight, kills yet more Wraiths and Demons, and has a not so restful sleep. Jenkins and Charlotte got into a vicious argument about a protracted conflict in a dry, hot part of the world that had apparently only just started when they were abducted. It would show up on the record and negatively impact my next performance evaluation. They are tortured geniuses. Nach, Faen and Delv, security and hardware experts that excel in getting the team in and out of heavily protected places and computer systems to conduct espionage. And we have other weakness. Next! I ordered. I didnt have time to explain. Your Superman sounds like Tvnndrkktktk, who defended his tribe from a pack of predators for a year without sleeping., Or Gudruvgnagnut, who grew so large that his tribe could shelter beneath him from the year-storm, said Vedreg. This is a fantastic return. I had never paid much attention to poetry, art and fiction. Much of its body was covered in obviously synthetic fabric, with only the forepaws and head visible. The twin patches of fur above his eyes creased inwards and downwardsmy translator informed me that this emotion had no equivalent in my species. I had trouble understanding how somebody could hear the music written by Khachaturian, Tchaikovsky, Bach and Rutter and consider them dull, but other members of the crew reported that they preferred Jenkins taste in music. In hindsight, I really should have expected that Jenkins would have attracted a journalists attention. David captures a pirate, raids a gang HQ, meets an old Grey and goes hunting. A human ambassador reaches out to the all powerful Alliance! Absolutely amazing, really love how youve developed the story from the original. The locker reacted to the security codes my station security officers harness was broadcasting and opened, spilling out a pair of pulse guns, two personal shield emitters and a magazine of coin-sized nervejam grenades. Horses were. This story is so poignant to me so I really wanted to narrate it.Originally by /u/AssHatVik, i got the post from here:https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/blh6k1/text_no_graves_for_the_forgotten/. The Hunter had a clear shot and took it. Hfy Books Showing 1-50 of 299 Transcripts (Kindle Edition) by Michelle kathleen Hodgson (shelved 4 times as hfy) avg rating 4.50 48 ratings published Want to Read Rate this book 1 of 5 stars 2 of 5 stars 3 of 5 stars 4 of 5 stars 5 of 5 stars Armageddon? https://incompetech.filmmusic.io/ The Descent by Kevin MacLeodLink: https://incompetech.filmmusic.io/song/4490-the-descentLicense: https://filmmusic.io/standard-license This one will take the place of my usual weekly upload of Those Days With The Monsters because I've been unable to record audio this week due to illness :( I had the audio files for this already made so I edited them down, no pick ups were possible and I had to get creative at points! I guess I missed the notification, but this time I remembered the name. Now, twenty diurnals after the attack, there was just some greenish discolouration to show that he had ever been injured. *Cranes Neck Forward, Mouth Open, and Sinks Back Into A Classic Storyline.. How We All Read, Honestly.*. The Supremacy was sent to investigate a new world our long-range sensors show had space-age technology upon it. The medical report from the team that provided care to Jenkins after the battle said that his blood stream contained a powerful combat drug, though I was certain he hadnt ingested, inhaled or injected any during the fight. More information. Haven't come across it yet, but when I find it I'll certainly post it. Having originally opened as the United Artists Theatre in 1927, the lovingly restored 1,600-seater retains much of the charm and charisma instilled by its iconic founders, namely Mary Pickford and Charlie Chaplin. Theyre both products of the same religious root anyway!. I was linked to hfy by writingprompts though. Begins as a joke discussion about redheads being part fire-elemental. At first I thought it had received some pleasant comments and then sank without a trace. Us. science, hfy: 2013-01-24: 7 : September . The incident prompted the council to do two things: first they passed an amendment to the Treaty that allowed for a species to be declared sentient if it had developed calculus, rather than interplanetary FTL, though the Contact Prohibition would remain in effect until the species went interplanetary. He and I were good acquaintances, but his species are sticklers for observing some formalities upon greeting one another. He did that complicated joint-lift with his forelimbs againa shrug. Hows your arm? he asked, changing the subject. I filed this away as a rebuttal for the next officer to approach me on the subject. David hijacks a ship, makes contact with Gron and decides to change sides. I have to think that you, as a contributor, have more sway than a random internet plebe theyve already decided to shit on. Technically, as a member of a pre-interplanetary species, I am a non-sentient specimen of indigenous fauna and therefore cannot be legally employed or own property., I indicated my understanding by noddinganother gesture our body language shared in commonand raising the fur at the nape of my neck. After years of contact, most alien races know almost nothing about humans other than exaggerated horror stories; they rarely bother us, and the ones that do never return home. The story of Lablonnamedadon is one of the classic HFY storie. YASS. We do not deny an author's need to promote their work, however we do require this only be done in a relevant context. A second alarm began to soundthe long wail of a station damage alarm. So excited to see this. I'm just sort of curious whether the reference is intentional or even a reference at all. Other specimens of their art were interesting, thought-provoking. I havent slept in two standard Diurnals.. If Jenkins was to be believed, then the line between fantasy and reality was, for many humans, invisible. I just saw that Spellgun was on royalroad.com as a top read fiction earlier today. Henhouse. I have also had leaders who would repeat the code three times, even though thats not the norm. Kevin Jenkins did. That was amazing. Ugly motherfuckers.. We don't know why, but they apparently had been doing this for some time. It shrieked and flailed, swatting the human with its hindlimbs. Whenever Jenkins was with me, I noticed that he had a habit of focusing on the worst aspects. > If you enjoy the LitRPG genre, you may also enjoy my in-progress web serial Spellgun. Why not have the implant removed and return to your homeworld?, Because Id never be able to keep the secret, and so the Office for the Preservation of Indigenous Species wont let me, he said. I didnt know any better.. Constructed with our most advanced technology, to the point where systems were updated during construction, and having a length of nearly seven miles, it was the mightiest ship we had ever created. I literally yelped out loud. Today I found your first Prey story and felt it was one of the best stories I've ever read. Might want to see if that can be fixed. Suicide also seemed to be something they would resort to with little or no good reason. That's one of my favorites, It was an old green text I saw a long time ago. You have those nervejam grenade things. he pointed out. please leave this site immediately. What's not to love? There were three more behind it and I ducked into cover next to the human as their return fire threatened to overwhelm my defenses. Holy shit, it's here! He refused to be drawn on the subject of religion, instead preferring to compensate for the gaps in Jenkins and Charlottes knowledge regarding that region of their planet. Having them turn out to be just a misunderstood and lonely people in the cosmos, who had war declared on them and decided to play up the predator perk for intimidation, and then ending the conflict with a peace treaty instead of Total Defeat of Big Bad Guys would make for a much more fitting conclusion to the story. While carrying more than I suspected I could physically lift!after me. I've read a few stories based on this universe, most have been pretty damn good. Same, I reread the first two yesterday and saved the new installment for today but now it's gone Also, and I wish I had documented where it was: There's a missing quotation mark where a character says something then has a thought, then keeps speaking. 2. Literally can't read it on my phone. Humans, it seemed, had for most of their sentient era preferred to invent explanations for the world around them rather than admit a lack of knowledge. It feels like 500 or so years after the expanse, if the writers didn't use the same 7 phrases the whole book. Had to do a double take when I saw the notification. All life on Earth has been stolen away by The System, transported to another world at the behest of a distant galactic empire, who lived in terror of humanity's potential. Do you know when the next part may be coming? I collapsed, shaking from the pain. Exactly what it says on the tin, some awesome HFY writefaggotry about humanity as teachers and parents. Prepare to be disappointed. I try to stay in shape, but between the low gravity and not getting enough food Ive probably lost some muscleabout or slightly below average for a male of my size? he suggested. The dude did us a huge solid. You have an extraordinary talent for writing and crafting brilliant engaging characters! Hope you enjoy my narration of it. Interestingly, these two first stories spawned a series of stories written on this very subreddit, to which I'll link at the end of the last part. Looking back, it's actually worked out in our favour. Some had died off so early only a few stone monuments marked that they had ever been there, some had established empires spanning nearly a dozen systems. This is a historical day. Also stationed on the Flashing Hooves is, Moktep, an ambitious Bonthan Vice-Admiral. Update was totally worth the wait. There is a guy on SB who claims to be the original author to this. Three diurnals later, the council convened a special meeting. Asshole. This series had so much story potential until the reveal. It's progress, but doesn't wrap anything up yet. No story just yet, but ill be refreshing every couple of seconds, Ah my b took your comment as saying you didnt see the link before removal. For those who are upset by the strongly antitheistic content of part 0.2, I implore you to power on through it. 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